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托福口语模板及参考范文汇总之更受尊重的职业

托福口语题目:

It is generally agreed that the society benefits from the work of its members. Which type of contribution do you think is most valued by your society: primary school teachers, artists or nurses? Why?

托福口语参考范文:

Even though artists and nurses are 【also】 very important, I 【still】 believe primary school teachers are 【most valued】 by our society.

First, because these teachers enjoy 【the highest status】. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from【all】walks of life since 【everyone】 needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.

Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still 【too young】 to have 【any】 self-discipline and their parents are 【always】 busy with work, having 【no】 time to take care of them. So kids are in 【great】 needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.

“【】”体现——最受重视的“最”

托福口语参考答案:

Even though artists and nurses are +also very important, I still believe primary school teachers are the most valued by our society.

【观点】小让步 + 小学教师最受社会的重视

【论证:加+also,强调在让步;

语法:most如果修饰的是动词,表示“最……”,不用加the】

Firstly, because these teachers enjoy a higher status. As we know, the salary salaries of these teachers have been raised these years. And also they are respected by all walks of people people from all walks of life. For example, when they go to some restaurants, hotels or tourist spot spots, they can enjoy a comparatively lower low price.

托福口语模板分析:

【理由1:小学教师的地位比较高】

【从理由句就出现一个问题:没有体现——“最”,地位不是最高,工资不是最高,只有尊重来自“各行各业”算是体现了“最”。

但是来自各行各业人的尊重也论证不准确:拿到相对较低的交割并不等于被尊重。如果按照这个标准去评价:学生也受到了全社会的尊重,很多大型企业的职员也受到了全社会的尊重——这不过是一种福利,社会给的/企业给的福利。】

那什么原因让各行各业的人都尊重他们呢?——因为都要送孩子去学校嘛!——因为小学教师的影响力太大呀!受益方太多啊!——你的孩子,或许可能不上高中,上中专;不上大学,上大专;不上研究生,上班——但,你的孩子能连小学都不上吗?——所以才超重视嘛!

语法:1. salary是可数名词,故these teachers的工资,应该用复数形式;

2. 并没有all walks of people这样的表达,如果想说“来自各行各业的人”,可以说“people from all walks of life”;

3. comparatively的意思是:“相较而言”,故后边无须再加比较级】

Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we know, kids are the future of our country. If they are taught very well, they will have a better contribution to our country. And a good teacher will actually change the future of our kids.

【理由2:教师的贡献无可替代】

【理由句正确,但是论证根本没有证明这种“不可替代性”。这里说到的内容是:孩子是国家的未来。他们接受了良好的教育,长大才能报效祖国。一个好教师将能够改变孩子的未来——这并没有体现不可替代性啊?这只能体现小学教师这个行业的重要性啊!

什么是不可替代性呢?就是:这些事情只能由小学教师来完成,其他人无法替代他们完成。

什么样的人可能会替代小学教师的工作呢?1. 小学生自己;2. 家长。1不行,因为他们太小,缺乏自律性;2不行,因为他们太忙,没有时间。

综上,Pt修改后的最终版:Even though artists and nurses are 【also】 very important, I 【still】 believe primary school teachers are 【most valued】 by our society.

First, because these teachers enjoy 【the highest status】. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from【all】walks of life since 【everyone】 needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.

Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still 【too young】 to have 【any】 self-discipline and their parents are 【always】 busy with work, having 【no】 time to take care of them. So kids are in 【great】 needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.

“【】”体现——最受重视的“最”

【幸运的开窍---口语篇】

刚来亦鸥的时候,被高分录音吓惨了。一个两个说得有流利语音语调又那么棒。我之前考雅思口语是7,本来我对自己还小有信心,听完大家的,突然觉得完了自己口语是不是只能18分了。其实没那么可怕啦,因为好多人打好草稿会录好多遍才传上去,你怎么可能第一次说就有别人说的那么好呢?更何况即使是native speaker刚刚遇到一个陌生的题目只给15s30s时间,也说不了那么顺溜,考试的时候怎么可能出现这么完美的答案嘛。(大牛们,我不是故意的><)带着这样“邪恶”的想法,你才能够对自己充满信心。

Task1-2如果时间够多,最好还是好好练亦鸥90题,毕竟寂静是靠不住的。(听到没?!快快来刷90题!)(主页君:不要忘记参加咱们的#晒出你的90题进度#的活动哦!)考前我看寂静看到11.30,第二天去考试的路上还在组织语言,结果一题都没中哎><不要投机取巧啊。。。我虽然口语是26,但task12是fair,还是挺可惜的。当时在晨读的时候没有好好利用晨读资源,万分后悔。

Task3、5问题不大,没有管,拿GOOD意料之中。Task4、6问题大了去了,考前一周在群里模考的时候我还磕磕绊绊讲不好例子呢,但后来为什么拿了GOOD呢?我觉得原因有两个:一是我花了一整个下午的时间听了亦鸥的网友微课。我把Miya老师整理的task4微课全部听了一遍,让录音带着我做题,慢慢就找到感觉了。细节是加分点,不过更重要的是你能不能提炼出professor说的主旨和框架。不要一味说多说多,时间真的不够。6句话足以解决T4&6!每说一句话就画一个圈圈,把有用的词放进来。)第二个突飞猛进的原因是考前三四天的时候练了亦鸥的口语模考,这个必须力荐!你们练了就知道了,只有真实放在考试的环境中多练几次,考试了才能不慌。

介绍一些值得积累的表达:

1. 【enjoy the highest status】享有最高的社会地位

2. 【people from all walks of life】各行各业的人

3. 【pupils】 “小学生“,不过,你知道这个词还有一个意思是:“瞳孔”吗?什么?不知道?提到了直接查网络词典的翻译,他们会告诉你:拓宽眼界=widen one's field of vision 你千万别以为这是比“broaden one's horizons”更高级的说法。因为:field of vision的意思是:

额……所以,就真的是“眼界”的意思,就是你的瞳孔(pupil)能够看到的范围。。。所以这就是查在线翻译的问题所在啊!它怎么知道你要说的是个比喻义呢???所以,请自己查纸质版字典,不要一味依靠在线翻译哦!

4. 【too young to have any self-discipline】太小以至于没有任何自律性。首选,too...to...,是太……以至于不能/没有……;其次,缺乏自律性,缺乏自控能力,请用have no self-discipline或者lack discipline来表述,请不要用:cannot control themselves!Pt就经常见到有人写”I cannot control myself“(这基本上就是:I have schizophrenia. I am crazy. 我精神分裂了,我疯了!)这可不是我缺乏自控能力哦!这意思可是南辕北辙!

5. 【be in great needs of sth.】迫切需要……。大家还可以说be in big(美式英语)/ considerable(英式英语,所以你可以看出美式超实用,英式高B格~)/ strong need of sth. 还可以说There is a great need for sth. 这里的need是名词,这表达就要比:I really need sth.或者I need sth. badly/ desperately/ urgently. 的说法B格高很多。为什么?因为动词转换成了名词呀~

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